I have seen your face turn to grass,
With time passed,
And tickets paid for,
As the rain carves the lines that make you.
This smile that’s gotten you through
Now turns intricate with wrinkles,
Which are always there,
Time’s grooves
Where fingers press and follow time’s tattoos.
I have seen your face turn to grass,
Where your lines that have been drawn
Draw back into their maker,
Time or God knows what.

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March 11, 2010 at 10:48 am
Megz
Oh My..thats a beautiful poem there…
i soooo loved the title..
time Tattoos…
great one there dear
March 11, 2010 at 12:54 pm
BFG
thank you very much, appreciate your comments.
March 11, 2010 at 12:52 pm
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March 11, 2010 at 1:15 pm
slpmartin
I love the image created with the title “Times Tattos” …so many dimensions with that….excellent.
March 11, 2010 at 1:18 pm
BFG
thank you very much!
March 11, 2010 at 1:25 pm
shoelessboywonder
Great Title, great way to describe it i wouldn’t change a thing. Be proud of what you have done.
March 11, 2010 at 1:32 pm
BFG
thank you very much, very nice to say.
March 11, 2010 at 1:30 pm
suzicate
WOW…that is awesome. Love the title, the images, and how it made me think. The analogy is great.
March 11, 2010 at 1:32 pm
BFG
I am honored, thank you!
March 11, 2010 at 3:34 pm
Tristan Avelino
I too was struck by the title: Time’s tattoos! It’s a Gorgeous poem and well told. Subtle and nice, enjoyable read, I had to read it again and again! I really really like this poem!
March 11, 2010 at 3:36 pm
BFG
Many appreciations!
March 11, 2010 at 3:43 pm
Tristan Avelino
Hi! I’m sorry but i don’t know your name…I have a personal list of favourite poems and I cannot pay tribute to you because I don’t know your name. I would really like to add this poem to my list. Would you email me?
March 11, 2010 at 4:09 pm
BFG
Hi Tristan,
Thanks so much, that’s quite the honour.
March 11, 2010 at 4:44 pm
I.S.
Just the title alone sends my mind racing. Loved it!
~IS
March 16, 2010 at 12:48 pm
BFG
Great! Thank you!
March 11, 2010 at 5:14 pm
samanthayeh
the imagery of each individual line is impeccable, and as mentioned by previous commentors, the analogy is thought-provoking.
i enjoyed this. thank you.
March 16, 2010 at 12:47 pm
BFG
Thanks so much for your time in reading this, and for the comment!
March 11, 2010 at 9:47 pm
fiveloaf
face turn to grass- wonderful expression really.. hey there are many in my early archives which might mean something to you if you care to browse..
March 16, 2010 at 12:39 pm
BFG
I will browse, indeed. Thanks!
March 12, 2010 at 7:05 am
Yousei Hime
I love how every time I think I’ve grasped the image of the face, it slips away and I have to look closer and closer. Beautifully constructed. Thank you for sharing this.
March 16, 2010 at 12:37 pm
BFG
Many thanks for your wonderful response, I really appreciate it.
March 12, 2010 at 9:11 am
nanno1982
This is beautiful BFG.. “time’s tattoos” is a very sublime title.. deep and profound!
March 16, 2010 at 12:34 pm
BFG
thanks so much!
March 12, 2010 at 9:59 am
Ji
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/11/week-9-poets-rally-participants-you-deserve-an-award-pick-one/
an award for Rally members of week 9,
please feel free to take one and enjoy!
Happy Friday!
March 12, 2010 at 1:13 pm
Ji
amazing poem,
so animated,
I see you action in your words!
March 16, 2010 at 12:29 pm
BFG
Thank you very much, Ji. I appreciate the comment.
March 12, 2010 at 5:29 pm
Gerardine Baugh
sad, and not. Time passed with someone there. very nice!
Gerardine
March 16, 2010 at 12:29 pm
BFG
agreed! Thanks!
March 27, 2010 at 5:52 am
trisha
you have used a name that explains it so perfectly. excellent poem.
March 29, 2010 at 9:58 am
BFG
thank you so much!