There’s still love here,
it tick-tocks in our
stomachs tight
from over-exposure. Like an apple
rotting,
what made it
weakens, looking as death
would seconds prior to realizing itself.
Another pint works as filler,
filling the holes
quietly in lovely melodies made bitter
by over-thinking-over-time-and-over-reactions,
losing what’s close
with no grip on it leaving.
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March 12, 2011 at 9:58 pm
Jingle
profound one.
March 14, 2011 at 10:03 am
BFG
Thanks Jingle! And thanks for reading.
March 14, 2011 at 12:53 pm
lizbethsgarden
Very interesting — it makes me want to know the rest of the story.
May 4, 2011 at 10:14 am
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May 5, 2011 at 11:41 am
Jingle
perfect piece of writing..
keep it up.
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